Final Essay Revision

Essential Question: What is the meaning of Freedom

Goal: to revise our essays

Agenda:
1. Read Silently
2. Work on revising our essays

Install the GRAMMARLY extension.

Today I will show you two essays and discuss how to revise them effectively.

Here are things to work on:
1. Clear introduction
2. Counter claims: Set them up and Knock them down
3. Each paragraph is on a separate topic
4. Add a conclusion
5. Be specific about the ammendment
6. Make sure your paragraph explains how the freedom is still under attack and needs to be defended.
6. Fix grammar using Grammarly
7. Add MLA by adding the EasyBib addon

Homework:
1. Finish vocabulary chart
2. Finish your independent reading book